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A Journey |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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A Journey Have you ever shopped a view? And think which one you’d like the most Where dreams await you in a coup Like choosing candy from a host Have you ever dug so deep? You could not center out the core Nor could you find a bottom reap This well you dug in evermore Or have you ever smelled a vent Remember all the tone of weld Pick a flower and held its scent Of all of nuance that it held Does it strain periphery? Did you assimilate its aim? The omnibus and mystery The essence of the odors claim Just a remained that it’s there This journey of the full aware |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Good Morning Sy! Loved your morning offering~ At times it is all too much to take in eh? I'm recovering nicely from a wee bit of pneumonia. But reading you always makes me feel much better.  &  , NancyIn the midst of winter, |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Good mornin', Mr. T.! It is because of your astute powers of observation that makes for a fine poet who writes from a place of full aware!  You see with your heart, mind, eyes and soul! ~ May all your visions be pleasant ones! EA |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Does it strain periphery? Did you assimilate its aim? The omnibus and mystery The essence of the odors claim Just a remained that it’s there This journey of the full aware this is such awareness at it's fullest....and you pen the perfumed essence of it all...thank you Sy |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Nancy, Sorry you were ill and glad you are feeling better. Maybe a will help.Earth Angel Unfortunately there is always bad with the good, but that's a personal thing. LeeJ You are very kind.  and the top of the morning to ya. |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Loved the Journey that you took me through on this poem. Nice write your poetry always goes great with my coffee |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
trutodaraiders LOL There is nothing like great coffee and a good read. Thank you |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Sir Sy coffee in hand I took this morning journey with you and enjoyed myself so much... good morning |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Lady Good morning dear Lady, so I'm glad you enjoyed the trip. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Sir Sy.... I liked my journey with you  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
You're so well read you strain my head, with dictionary in hand. I wonder how I got this far with words I understand. But English is my Language it's just I've never heard a poet practice eloquence in every single word! Your powers of observation leave me within the shade. A beacon shining in my dark words gleaming on the page. But then you've more experience in kindling inner glow. And possibly a better grasp of things I've yet to know. I'll learn myself Queen's English and try to make it flow. But until then, I'll read your work and follow where you go! |
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Beatrice Boyle Member
since 2006-12-06
Posts 438 |
The nice thing about your journeys Sy, is that they are so effortless to take, and we always learn something to boot!  Bea |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
RDB, I'm so glad you came along. ivor, I don't mind as man that says his mind. And you said it quite elegantly. Bea, But you are a queen bee are you not? |
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ivordavies Senior Member
since 2007-01-10
Posts 739Chester, England |
Sey, Bea careful, our Bea has a sting! Ivor PS but she's as sweet as honey.... |
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sewasham Senior Member
since 2006-09-11
Posts 714Oklahoma, USA |
Thanks for another great read Seymour. Take care and Have fun. Steve |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Ivor LOL Sometimes when you take honey you do get stung. sewasham I'm still trying, thank you. |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Another wonderful journey with you Sir T.... thank you. It is always most enjoyable to share your scenic ink trails! He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
icequeen A pleasure to be of service. |
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