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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Fog Moves slowly Through the small city Everywhere In shrouded neighborhoods The mood is faintly white As if the past Had come to visit Dressed in lambent mist To see and sigh Before they go . |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
John~ This is about as pretty a read as I'll find this day~ I adore the thought of your 'lambent mist'~ Huge *sighs* over the sheer beauty of these thoughts~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very much enjoyed this  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
and to think I slept through it.  lambent One of my very favorite words. And yet again, John, you dazzle me with your simplicity. Your writing ability has never been a question for me. You happen to be one of my favorite poets here. |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
How lovely and wistful this is! Very much enjoyed. In the midst of winter, |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Very lovely, almost misty in its presentation. a good commitee can decimate communication. |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
I enjoyed reading this and picturing it! Very beautiful! Betty Lou Betty Lou Hebert |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
Thank you all I'm glad you like what was almost lost as I had forgotten about and only came upon it by accident scrolling through a wholly unrelated file in my PC at the office. Thanks again Very much John |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi John...you are indeed a word artist..without all the words that I seem to need, you paint. |
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Betty Senior Member
since 2002-08-13
Posts 1159Virginia |
This is beautiful Betty |
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sandgrain Member Elite
since 1999-09-21
Posts 3662Sycamore, IL, USA |
How happy I am that Marge gave me a heads-up to this one or I'd have missed this gem. I could feel the morning fog creeping along in your lines. Rae |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
simply gorgeous words John! RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Men are supposed to take a certain attitude when talking about other men's poetry....well, yonder clasts another icon, I guess....this is gentle and good, and yes as our friend Marge said already, it's pretty...and I will say so. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
it's already been said but yes...very pretty |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
This is delicate, like a flower in its presentation. I think that's what I like most about your poetry, the way it's almost a watercolor. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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icequeen Senior Member
since 2001-12-09
Posts 633FL USA |
Oh yes... you are simply amazing the way you paint a magnificent picture in my eyes with so few words needed to do so. Your pen is also a paintbrush. Caroline He who wants a rose must respect the thorn. |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all again, I am really surprised at the reponse to this It suggests a mere flute must always subordinate itself to the music, even while not knowing the origin of the sounds. Thanks all again John . |
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