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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Yet Still I hold on to a faded paper heart placed in my hand in a bad decision thin are these curved cut lines I go on yes I go on yet I still feel and I love you, I love you still “all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I have read this 3 times Helen, trying to respond in a way that shows I understand...  M |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yep |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
I know this feeling... In the midst of winter, |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Helen.... I feel for you in this write..  hugs to you my friend RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
this line is amazing "placed in my hand in a bad decision" I know this feeling and I feel for you  |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Helen, you know, I am sure, that I truly understand how you feel. I'm sending you a big, comforting hug. Hope it helps. |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Yes still , yes I know those feelings Hope |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Love's no less real or deep because it may have been born of bad decisions... and it stays just as steadfastly, sometimes more. Excellent write! |
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MoonShadow Senior Member
since 2001-08-02
Posts 943Dark side of the Moon. |
Such is love unconditional. Excellent symbolism and imagery. MoonShadow . |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
It never ends -- never. Once said within the heart, the words echo forever. ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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Krishankins
since 2002-06-23
Posts 972Texas |
I can simply nod with a sigh....sweet Helen. |
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MARK V SHELDON Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 3015In a corporeal internship... |
...yet still I wait for an update a couple of years overdo... Good to see you here again, HeLen -- hope you're well. -MVS You CAN make a difference, but first you should learn how: http://educate-yourself.org/intro.shtml |
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