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MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.

0 posted 2007-01-20 06:56 PM



“Remembered”

She remembered the first time he saw her,
the first time he whispered her name.
She felt like a young farmers daughter,
who gave him her love all the same.

He remembered the lilt of her laughter,
her sparkling eyes when he came.
He promised his love ever after,
and gave her his heart and his name.

They remembered their lifetime together
the hard times, the fortune and fame.
They passed through the good and bad weather
shared honors and failures with pain.

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© Copyright 2007 Kenneth W. Myers - All Rights Reserved
The_Nameless_One
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since 2007-01-20
Posts 165
Missouri
1 posted 2007-01-20 07:02 PM


very interesting poem i liked it a lot. It made me feel the power of the bond that these two people share with eachother.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-01-20 07:14 PM


yes!!! wonderful words!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Angel4aKing
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since 2006-09-27
Posts 1372
USA
3 posted 2007-01-20 07:54 PM


Could bring up so many memories...I like it alot.

~~~kingsangel~~~

MoonShadow
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since 2001-08-02
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Dark side of the Moon.
4 posted 2007-01-22 12:04 PM



   Nameless, RDB and Angel... thank you for your kind response.

          MoonShadow
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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
5 posted 2007-01-22 01:17 PM


Well done Ken.
Had a major puter crash over the weekend.
Please email me.
Hugs~Nancy

In the midst of winter,
I found there lives within me..
An invincible summer.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634
The Southwest
6 posted 2007-01-23 12:51 PM



sounds like soulmates MoonShadow
beautifully done...

passing shadows
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displaced
7 posted 2007-01-23 06:46 AM


gorgeous write!
SmartChick
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since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
8 posted 2007-01-23 07:39 AM


A wonderful memory to have.
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