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Desert Dance
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Desert Dance |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA 
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Sand glides the delicate wilderness As wandering rogue clouds scowl At the waterless lands… Where might The dance of water’s sweet shower come to this solemn, yet serene abode where a brazen though cautious predator stealthily stalks a sleek and shivering traveler of the night. Poised, the dagger, glinting Against the moon’s light….dancing In the eyes of a helpless prey, Fear Has brought the vein’s ice…Fear Smiles into soon lifeless eyes as A whisper softly echoes and sands Glide a delicate wilderness…as Wandering rogue clouds scowl And the last gasp of a helpless prey careens against canyon walls. [This message has been edited by Magnus (01-21-2007 11:59 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Magnus Very descriptive and intense. Well done |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Hey welcome back! Very intense write. |
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Nightshade
since 2001-08-31
Posts 13962just out of reach |
Hello there my friend ! Good to read you always wonderful words again. hugs, Chris Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance. |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
whew... powerful work Barry good to see you back |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
good to read you again and how powerful the imagery! |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Much enjoyed! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Magnus~ 'A whisper softly echoes and sands Glide a delicate wilderness' ... there is something in this thought that calls to me~ It just happens to like me very much~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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