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Allysa
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In an upside-down garden

0 posted 2007-01-22 10:56 PM


He is talking but the words
are not making much sense,
she'll start the walk down the
crooked streets, across their country

two thousand, one hundred and eighty

lines engraved into her feet from
the miles she walks while he sleeps, please
do not try, I will not listen to your words,
she will murmur, she will whisper

to the dark sky as she walks, she will
talk about the places they would go, and
she is left to imagine what it is like
to walk step after step, barefoot and

two thousand, one hundred and eighty

words are all we have said in our time,
he is clutching the blanket, she is holding
her wrist, checking for a pulse to make sure
that life is what she is bringing

two thousand, one hundred and eighty

heartbeats she will press into his skin,
hold him down to the ground, repeat the process
again and again, just to share all the minutes
so she won't be gone, and he won't be

alone in the darkness, typing phrases about
tears, she will not be hiding her face when she
shrieks in the night, calling out for some-
thing, something to save her.

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passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
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displaced
1 posted 2007-01-23 06:52 AM


wow! sad but I loved it!
SmartChick
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081
On A Journey To The Unknown
2 posted 2007-01-23 07:31 AM


Awwww, this is so sad.
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