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Open Poetry #40

You In Me..Me In You

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

0 posted 2007-01-16 12:30 PM

Silken threads that bond us to each other

Sourced in light from hearts own pool and phased not to smother.

The Independent light of lovein sibling, parent, lover companion in life's journey, offering hand with which to cover.

Fears of failure, doubts and pain,all needs which fairly shared Distribute and diminish, leaving space for dreams that dared.

A Joint target of Life won,Tasks done, souls bared To closest scrutiny by our celestial parent; New Body pared.

To heavenly form from that start in seedy clay

Made divine by love alone and caring, daring, sharing say.

Life seen through someone else's eyes, a Golden piercing ray Doth shine within us, bounces back, increases every day

The best in us, the blessed in us, the truth that truly may Open the door knocked upon, in brothers heartfelt way.

And Truth and Life, revealed in one

With One in All, does offer pay

In full..

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2007-01-16 06:30 AM

WOW!!!! this is a different write from you my sweet Bill.... I like it!!! RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Interloper

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-06

Posts 8369
Deep in the heart

2 posted 2007-01-16 10:04 AM

Write on

Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

LeeJ
Member Patricius

since 2003-06-19

Posts 13296

3 posted 2007-01-16 12:59 PM

incredible

loved this

The Independent light of lovein sibling, parent, lover companion in life's journey, offering hand with which to cover.

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

4 posted 2007-01-17 12:59 PM

yes, this is a departure for you Bill
and a lovely one

trutodaraiders
Senior Member

since 2006-12-02

Posts 820
CA

5 posted 2007-01-17 01:21 AM

Thanks for the comments I was not sure about this 1..

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