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Night Song!
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Night Song! |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA 
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Night Song! The sun is setting night is falling the mists are rolling across the waters,in the distance I hear calling wahyas spirit in the twilight. Can you tell me what he seeks is he talking to his mate,will she answer to his call or just go on her way alone? Silent villiage sound asleep fires banked for the heat,embers buried in the ashes wait for the wind to fan them. Moonlight like a blanket lies sparkling upon the waters,splashing sound a fish jumps feeding on misquitoes. Cattails waving in the breeze that also stirs the scent of honeysuckle,owl flies dipping low searching for a midnight meal. Raccoon comes to the water, shyly looking all around him,all the night sounds go still, panther stalks through the forest. Once he is past the crickets start up soon joined by a nightly chorus,katydids and bullfrogs, owl has spotted a field mouse. What a noisy place this is and yet sleep on the two legs,soon the morning sun will rise, as will they to offer prayers! granny!
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Granny.... just beautifully said! RDB |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Granny.... just beautifully said! RDB Sigi Roniece Dawson-Bruce I am both honored and humbled by your words and so deeply grateful!
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I love this! Beautiful writing! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Gracious Granny, my own words are incapable of expressing the extent of my love for yours! Reading your poetry is always a transcendental experience for me. Thank you, Dear One With Nature Spirits.  Loving Light, EA |
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trutodaraiders Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820CA |
Such graceful scenery you place in readers mind. Superb creativity. |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Silent villiage sound asleep fires banked for the heat,embers buried in the ashes wait for the wind to fan them. Moonlight like a blanket lies sparkling upon the waters,splashing sound a fish jumps feeding on misquitoes. My gosh, the energy in this was amazing, not to mention the visuals...it pulled me right into a mind movie...excellent jobber... |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
Granny you always amaze and delight... |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Sigi PassingShadows my heart is grateful for your kindness!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Beloved Elohi Anidawehi your spirit answers to the call of Mother Earth,it is the ancients you hear speaking to you and I am so very honor to be the messenger!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
Siyo Trutodaraiders,in the old ways of story telling,one must bring the hearer into the story.Help with words and motion each thing spoken of to come to life.It is my hope I gift this to those who read,at least a little.My thanks to you for you kindness!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
My gosh, the energy in this was amazing, not to mention the visuals...it pulled me right into a mind movie...excellent jobber... Sigi from my heart LeeJ,you can not know how much you honor me with you words.I am deeply grateful!
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
My Lady sister my heart thanks you!
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