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trutodaraiders
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0 posted 2007-01-14 12:13 PM



Self created vision or divided void
what imaginings can these be filled.
Abundant cup once teeming,but how devoid
Soul once shining now grains are willed.

I can see the vacant crying eyes
I feel the sunken barren heart
I hear the thought once smug and wise
Once cakes of passion,now bitter tarts.

Each night in bed,in isolation he lays
With grasping hand,in a velvet glove
Each day comfortless,and desolate craze
Reaching for the incessant thought of love.

Poetry is just the evidence of life.
If your life is burning well, poetry is just the ash. "
Leon Cohen~



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Tom Zart
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1 posted 2007-01-14 09:32 PM


You are out of your mind and a dam good poet.
trutodaraiders
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2 posted 2007-01-14 11:23 PM


Thanks Tom..I am a little crazy wouldnt have it any other way
wredgranny
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3 posted 2007-01-14 11:39 PM




Siyo Trutodaraiders one would have to I think be a little mad to fall in love,trusting another person so fully with something as fragile as their heart.But still you make one to wonder if perhaps,it might be worth it to find out?
blessings


  granny!

trutodaraiders
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4 posted 2007-01-15 01:18 AM


To gain love to loose love..to search for love sometimes it seems never ending thank you for your blessing and the nice reply
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