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morbid
Junior Member
since 2007-01-05
Posts 22
Arkansas USA

0 posted 2007-01-09 09:49 AM



When I go I don’t know what to say
Don’t know how to show what I feel
When I run I don’t know how to say what I feel
‘Cos it don’t feel real

But I know I don’t see
What I use to believe
You and I
We’re just empty
Floating through life
Without light
Without fight
Without trying

But I’m standing here without you
I’m standing on my own
Now your gone my eyes have cleared
And I see
That I’m better off alone

When I left I was sure that I was
Doomed to a life without light
Without saviour
Now I see you were holding me back from the
Light all along
You’re the hater

I’m standing here without you
I’m standing on my own
Now your gone my eyes have cleared
And I see
That I’m better off alone

I’m better off with a new beginning
Without you dragging me down
Starting over
Without you bedside me
Wearing your fake crown

I’m standing here without you
I’m standing on my own
Now your gone my eyes have cleared
And I see
That I’m better off alone

© Copyright 2007 wiLL Baum - All Rights Reserved
trutodaraiders
Senior Member
since 2006-12-02
Posts 820
CA
1 posted 2007-01-09 10:08 AM


Will..Sometimes things are not meant to be. Good to see you standing on your own.
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
2 posted 2007-01-10 03:57 AM


strong words Will... remember the good times they will get you thru  ... I think I better send you some more hugs just in case    RDB
passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
3 posted 2007-01-10 07:19 AM


sometimes we are better off alone

until the right one comes along

morbid
Junior Member
since 2007-01-05
Posts 22
Arkansas USA
4 posted 2007-01-10 08:35 AM


ty
it's weird being called will after everyone calls me morbid loL it feels good

anyways after all the bad relationships and heartache i relized im better alone and instead of searchin for someone wait till they find me

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115
South Africa
5 posted 2007-01-10 09:37 AM


Sometimes the gaining of anything worthwhile in life requires us to take the first step and sometimes that could just be the "thinking" on what we'd like.  Waiting is fine but keep thinking!
JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
6 posted 2007-01-12 05:28 PM


A relationship can help us understand what we want and what we don't want...James
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