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droppinginsideout
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since 2006-08-04
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TENN

0 posted 2007-01-09 08:08 PM


im thinking before i speak
about how we all tend to mistreat
the availability every once in a while.(to rendevous)
between you and me i see no way out,
and "ill be here til' the ends." wont hold out.
too many times has it been so held down,
to the fact that its not numb anymore.

its too bad for me to think about this,
yet not so sad when it kills me like this
take a deep breath and choke back the tears
clear you mind
and THINK ABOUT IT

how its never really the same anymore.
memories too fond of visits always bring me back for more.
tending to my hopes in hope that one day ill snap out of it.
i cant help but to see the same things over and over again.
but until we find a place to start, where will it begin?

~Jamison~    "feeling sorrow for all the things u had to steal and borrow, bring back the dates we had b4 tomorrow"-red jumpsuit apparatus

© Copyright 2007 Jamison - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2007-01-09 08:26 PM


Hello Jamison - this is the first piece of work I have read of yours.. it's thought provoking and enjoyed...  and if you are new to Pip then I welcome you   RDB
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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displaced
2 posted 2007-01-10 03:39 AM


I can relate
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2007-01-12 05:27 PM


I'm thinking about it...Are you on the same page...do you have the same desires or goals...James
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