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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989
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He is the voice of reason that calms me when my heart is pounding in my chest and my sanity is ready to explode; when I am insipid and life is inane, he grounds me to reality, he is my tranquility. Years of wisdom reverberate though his words his voice, and euphony of calm that quills the madness running through these veins... his touch alone soothes the soul of I, the weary traveler journeying through this life on the pathway to Utopia. {Love has it's own time, it's own season, and it's own reasons for coming and going. You cannot bribe it or coerce it or reason it into staying. If it chooses to leave, from your heart or the heart of a lover, there is nothing you can do and nothing you should do. Be glad that it came to live for a moment in your life. If you keep your heart open, it will surely come again. From Simple Truths Author Kent Nerburn} |
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Devious Intellectual Member
since 2006-05-08
Posts 112 |
nice like this, very fluid and shows your feelings straight out |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"his touch alone soothes the soul of I, the weary traveler journeying through this life on the pathway to Utopia." Very beautiful Donna. And I love your sig line!  In the midst of winter, |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Thank you DI, I appreciate your visit. Hey Nancy, that quote is from one of my favorite books which covers all topics of life. That particular passage is my favorite though. Hugs you. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Enjoyed the read GentleSpirit *coco* |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Donna, I understand this completely. Gary is all this to me. Hugs, Ethel |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Coco, thank you so much. Ethel, awww I knew you would understand. Hugs sweetie. |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
He is the voice of reason that calms me when my heart is pounding in my chest and my sanity is ready to explode; Sigi Gentle Spirit,you are a wonderful teacher!
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Gentle Spirit Utopia, that's right next to Uhopia. Wonderful write enjoyed the read.  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
When the meeting of opposites results in tranquility then you know you're on to something good! Enjoyed your words GS! |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"his touch alone soothes the soul" keep him gentle Donna he's a good one love this... |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Beautifully penned .... RDB |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
perfectly described! |
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arthur Senior Member
since 2001-08-14
Posts 678england |
can one reach utopia ? does it exist? perhaps only within oneself arthur? |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
his voice, and euphony of calm that quills the madness running through these veins... outstanding |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
1derful Poet, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
his voice, and euphony of calm that quills the madness running through these veins... Sounds like you've found the perfect respite... beautiful write! *S* |
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JL Member Ascendant
since 2004-04-01
Posts 6128Texas, USA |
Very nice. JL Thomas, because thou hast seen me, thou hast believed: |
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