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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2007-01-13 08:34 AM


The Juxtapose

I cannot stop the juxtapose
Nor the odors in my nose
The light slips underneath my lid
And shakes the slumber of my ID

I cannot push away the flow
The creeping light that says hello
The bright that makes each mornings bid
And wakes this sleeping hominid

It is each day a frightening sail
The fear of facing Jonas’s whale
The compromise of one on one
When all is said and all is done

We all look out the window frame
To see a purpose to our aim
But still it stays within my head
We really sleep a single bed

Still let us say you could move in
It’s two to one we’d live in sin

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1 posted 2007-01-13 09:33 AM


lol ....  thanks for the warm smiles this cold Saturday morning Seymour.
hugs, Chris

Poetry is an echo, asking a shadow to dance.
Carl Sandburg

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2 posted 2007-01-13 11:00 AM


Top o' the mornin', T-Man!

You are one mighty clever hominid ~ and one with an adorable hint of naughtiness!

"It is each day a frightening sail
The fear of facing Jonas’s whale"

~ Methinks that it be Jona's Whale,
  That be afraid when ye set sail!
  (winky winky)

Loves 'n hugs 'n angel kisses,
EA

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3 posted 2007-01-13 11:15 AM


love it
Seymour Tabin
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4 posted 2007-01-13 11:19 AM


Earth Angel
Me thinks it was Randy Dragon who was writing this morning.

Chris,
Your smile is my pay for the day.

Seymour Tabin
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5 posted 2007-01-13 11:20 AM


passing,

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6 posted 2007-01-13 11:36 AM


Your writes are always refreshing with my cup of coffee. Outstanding job!
Seymour Tabin
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7 posted 2007-01-13 11:39 AM


trutodaraiders
Always a pleasure to be of service. Thank you

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8 posted 2007-01-13 01:08 PM


Smile

Hi Seymore

With such thoughts i would be delited to wake up every morning he he.

Nice write

Smiles and best wishes

Jes / Dreamer

Seymour Tabin
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9 posted 2007-01-13 01:23 PM


Jes
LOL I'm smiling.

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10 posted 2007-01-13 01:28 PM


Did I ever tell you that it is that "naughty and nice" about you that is the foundation of all that charm of yours?  

      
Carpe' Diem    

Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 2007-01-13 01:41 PM


Sharon,
No but I'm glad you told me.

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12 posted 2007-01-13 04:02 PM


Sir Sy.... yes, I'm smiling here too!! loved this write of yours     RDB
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13 posted 2007-01-13 09:04 PM




whether Randy Dragon
or Sir Sy
this was a sinfully delicious write


Seymour Tabin
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14 posted 2007-01-13 10:06 PM


RDB,
Glad you enjoyed the write and thank you for the sweet reply.

Lady,
Just sinful enough to spice it up. LOL
Thank you

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15 posted 2007-01-23 02:08 PM


LOL... Randy stole your pen and breathed a little fire, didn't he? *S* This is wonderful! *S*
Seymour Tabin
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16 posted 2007-01-23 02:24 PM


suthern
Glad you were amused and thanks for the catchup.

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