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RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
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0 posted 12-23-2008 08:06 PM       View Profile for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed

Animal

Words have rained upon me
Flowed from my ruby lips
Words have become and destroyed me
So why hide it any longer

Water rules the oceans
Air commands the sky
I wish I were a part of them
For these things never die

Secrets weld the harden souls
To a heavy ball and chain
Secrets bury all the life
They dare, reject, and pain

The sun stars in the heavens
Man dictates on the ground
And yet the sun still scorches us
Our immunity unfound

Words have stabbed the warrior
In a pain much more acute
That the piercing of the blade or spear
That drew their thick red blood

Words have now no meaning
As our promises dissolve
Without this power we alone have
We are Animal


"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"
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1 posted 12-24-2008 12:32 AM       View Profile for Earl Robertson   Email Earl Robertson   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Robertson

KATE!!!!! Where have you been?? Hallelujah! it's a miracle, blah blah blah, (sorry couldn't resist ).


Words have stabbed the warrior
In a pain much more acute
That the piercing of the blade or spear
That drew their thick red blood

I really liked this, I know exactly what you're saying. Very well written!


My melancholy is purely my own
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2 posted 12-27-2008 04:52 PM       View Profile for hunnie_girl   Email hunnie_girl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for hunnie_girl

wow beautiful Kate Darling... Missed you a hella lot!
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Omgsh! Your back!! We should totally throw a party     
Your poem like usual are just outstanding.

-Zach

So together but so broken inside

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4 posted 01-06-2009 09:33 PM       View Profile for Assassin_of_Verse   Email Assassin_of_Verse   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Assassin_of_Verse

Hey Kate! It's been a while. It seems we've both been absent...
Anyway, I really liked this one, it has a lot of truth to it (to me).

Incidentily, I watched the movie ur quote came from over Christmas. O.o

There is power in the pen.

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Isn't it just the best? Lol. Miss you guys, And I have more stuff!!!!!!!!!!

-Kate <3

"Lucy: I think you are the most selfish person on the planet. George: Well that's just silly. Have you met everyone on the planet?"

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6 posted 06-11-2009 12:48 PM       View Profile for LittleWillow   Email LittleWillow   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for LittleWillow

This is amazing..
The way you describe things is great. You can picture them, relate to them and everything. Well done!
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