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hunnie_girl

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since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

0 posted 2008-12-02 12:05 PM

Be prepared its a long poem story.... might not really make sense to you but we'll see?

You were just another one night stand
except I think I fell for you
'cos I cant do anything right these days
unless you're telling me to.

It seemed we had more going
than just a casual roll in the hay
did you feel it too?
Or was I just another lay?

you held my hand in public
like you were more than just a friend
you let me stay in your arms
even after the nights came to an end

I know it was nothing more
than just a little fun
but I thought it would last forever
I didnt think you'd run

I should've known you'd get cold feet
when my ex found out about us
you said we'd still be together
if he didnt put up such a fuss

everytime I see you
you never even look my way
just another punch
to ruin my day

we went from good friends
to nothing at all
i've taken the hit
that caused me to fall

you were just another one night stand
another man who hasn't done right
now alone i'm in the dark
i'm the loser of the fight

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-12-02 09:07 AM

hey this is a great example of why you shouldn't sleep around. Why should he talk to you again?! You slept with him. Like it or not you can't just sleep with someone and expect to NOT get hurt. There is more to sex than just physical gratification.

I think you did a great job showing this!

I hope young readers to young adults will read this and come away with an understanding that you play, most times, your heart pays. Sad, but true.

freeand2sexy
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since 2008-09-12

Posts 704
CA, USA

2 posted 2008-12-02 07:27 PM

I agree with SEA but it was a very good poem. I can honestly say that it has helped open my eyes a lil more.

I love pancakes!!!

Ri
Member

since 2008-02-01

Posts 67
Blackburn, England

3 posted 2008-12-03 05:32 AM

I believe that sex should be the ultimate symbol of love and doing so is like a vow that you will stay with the person forever, so avoiding doing this unless it's the one is avoiding false promises and avoiding heartache

A great poem nonetheless

Falling rain

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since 2008-01-31

Posts 2178
Small town, Illinois

4 posted 2008-12-03 08:19 AM

Omgsh.. I read the title first and was like "Oh I bet this is gonna be good.. hehe" I agree with all ya. Sex should be a show for a devoted affection towards one person. Amazing poem as always hun!

-Zach

I'D RATHER BE ANYTHING BUT ORDINARY!!!! XP

Abbeon
Member

since 2006-11-30

Posts 228
Curiousity, and wonder

5 posted 2009-01-12 04:10 AM

Hunnie, Come on, You and i know beter then that. But, i know sleeping around does get people into trouble. Sex with out love is just that Sex a good feeling a good time. But when you love some one, and you know they love you, it feels like so much more. It feels like love inside and out. Hunnie, Im always here for you.

With love Abbeon

wwzwlmd8
Member

since 2006-09-23

Posts 96
San Diego,CA

6 posted 2009-01-12 09:52 PM

this is one of your greats
and i've been there to

~Indya

LittleWillow
Member

since 2007-12-27

Posts 54

7 posted 2009-06-11 12:46 PM

This is great!

Explains exactly something i did right down to a tea!

Couldnt believe it!

Cant wait to read more!
xx

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