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Fathima
New Member

since 2007-10-07

Posts 9
taif,saudi arabia

0 posted 2007-10-23 08:40 AM

I'm waiting,
I'm waiting,
I'm waiting,
Waiting with the hope,
That you will come,
Before,
God calls me,
Before,
I go to someplace,
Far away from where you are.

I'm waiting,
With the hope you will come,
I can never forget you,
Even if my mind forgets you,
My heart will not,
My blood will not,
Because,
Your name,
Your face,
All is engraved into my heart and blood,
It won't fade away.

I'm waiting,
With the hope you will come,
Through day or night,
Through dark or light,
Through good or evil,
Through space or time,
Through anything i will run to you when you come,
Just to have a glimpse of you,
Just to see that handsome face,
Just to see you smile and laugh once more.

I'm waiting
Waiting with the hope you will come.

stargal
Senior Member

since 2006-03-06

Posts 1352
OR USA

1 posted 2007-10-26 01:32 PM

Hi Fathima,

I'm curious about your critique message, that you want to be an author and poet someday. I would say you are already a poet, is this not a poem I just read?

I'd like to say more but at this moment I have to go, I will be back...

~Stargal

"The rising morning can't insure that we shall end the day; For death stands ready at the door to snatch our lives away"
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Verg
Member

since 2007-10-25

Posts 52
Colorado

2 posted 2007-10-26 04:24 PM

loved it but i didn't quite catch the meaning

Fathima
New Member

since 2007-10-07

Posts 9
taif,saudi arabia

3 posted 2007-10-31 08:05 AM

thanks, you guys. i was so scared that my poem won't be good. actually i wrote this poem because i'm waiting for this person(sorry, can't tell the name. too private)to come to me.

Fathima
New Member

since 2007-10-07

Posts 9
taif,saudi arabia

4 posted 2007-10-31 08:07 AM

thanks, you guys. i was so scared that my poem won't be good. actually i wrote this poem because i'm waiting for this person(sorry, can't tell the name. too private)to come to me.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2007-11-12 09:59 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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