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Teen Poetry #8

waiting for you

justanotherstorm
Member

since 2007-10-24

Posts 321

0 posted 2007-11-01 07:31 PM

yeah i just felt like writing this it doesnt mean nothin though

I hear the cars stalling
I see the stars are falling
Just wish I could see you tonight
Because the moon is shining so bright
Ive been missing you everyday
And the tears still wont go away
Just waiting for you to come here
Just wish you would be near
So I could hold you tight
And I could sleep with you
And finally say good night
I love you

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

1 posted 2007-11-01 07:51 PM

what do you mean? it means so much. you miss someone, sometimes this is the best way to let them know (comeing from expirence) people really like it, men and women too.

-Kate

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-11-01 10:21 PM

im with Kate... best way to tell someone... i liked it. especially how it starts out w/ the stars and moon and stuff. beautiful

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2007-11-12 09:59 PM

Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

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