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tapper798
Member

since 2003-07-20

Posts 353
My own world

0 posted 2007-10-07 01:57 PM

Dear boy,

Did you know that I love you,
Did you know I still care?
I might pretend but don’t be fooled,
I’m still wishing you were there.

I hope you know that I’m ok,
After months of tears and pain,
After months of knowing you’re no longer mine,
Times that nearly drove me insane.

Normally I’d embrace a change,
Enjoy the start of something new.
Normally I wouldn’t be stuck here,
But any normality ended with you.

Did you know, boy, that you are
a world full of wonderful and darkness rolled into one.
You can make me laugh and make me cry,
All before the day is done.

I’m stuck somewhere between the lines
Of what will and won’t ever be,
you cut me out then sew me back
but won’t take a chance on me.

Such a sad pathetic girl’s cry,
I crave to gain the love I lack.
My heart years to hear the words
I know you will never say back.

I’m sorry I let myself fall so deep
For a guy who could only bring tears,
I’m sorry that I let that love
Consume me for all these years.

I’m sorry that I lost my way,
But I’m not sorry that I loved you.
After all the things you put me through
I’m not sorry that I still do.

I guess I just wanted to let you to know
Although I love you I won’t make a show,
Cause it hurts like hell to love someone
Who fell out of love with you long ago.

Love Always,
Me

AIM-beatufu1tragidy

Tell me what you think about being open, about being honest with yourself.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-10-07 04:12 PM

The flow was amazing, I can always tell your poems from everyone elses you have your own style I love dhte words in this too.. so beautiful such emotion
Krysti

rebelangelv
Senior Member

since 2007-05-28

Posts 538
usa

2 posted 2007-10-07 05:33 PM

dangggggggg girl this is great!!! i loved it!

the_girl_next_door
Senior Member

since 2006-02-26

Posts 591
USA

3 posted 2007-10-08 04:22 PM

I’m sorry I let myself fall so deep
For a guy who could only bring tears,
I’m sorry that I let that love
Consume me for all these years.

Erin, this was my favorite stanza of the whole thing because I have a friend right now who knows she deserves better and that she loves this boy but she is having trouble letting go. and the part that says "I'm sorry I let THAT love consume me for all these years" it just really reminded me of her situation. This was a great poem, as is all of yours.

If you happen to get a chance, I wrote something a few weeks ago called "yes, you always could dress insults so lovely" and I think its worth a read. It's the first read thing I've written in a long time. thanks.

This was amazing.

=)

forever*wishing
Member

since 2006-05-29

Posts 178
where my heart is

4 posted 2007-10-08 04:52 PM

Did you know that I love you,
Did you know I still care?
I might pretend but don’t be fooled,
I’m still wishing you were there.

that was my favorite part...oh, and the rest of it

it was awesome... -> sry if i couldn't help, i think its perfect the way it is

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

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