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forever*wishing
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since 2006-05-29
Posts 178
where my heart is

0 posted 2007-10-08 04:44 PM


self inflicted
no one knew
his heart beated
to a different tune

it hums a melody
slow and steady
empty it screams
silence it rings

all rise in black
no one knew
the weight on his back
sang a tune

it hums a melody
slow and steady
empty it screams
silence it rings

monotonous song
if only he knew
not to move along
to that evil tune

it hums a melody
slow and steady
empty it screams
silence it rings

his soul echoes music
everyone knew
this holy lyric
a beautiful tune

it hums a melody
slow and steady
i love you! it screams
my child! it rings


-becca-

there's more to living than being alive

~Anberlin

© Copyright 2007 Becca - All Rights Reserved
nicole leigh
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since 2007-09-19
Posts 44
Eau Clair Wisconson
1 posted 2007-10-08 04:55 PM


wow that was very good i wrote a poem kind off like it except its about a girl

NIKKI  

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