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Teen Poetry #8

Foolish

Sexy_Tator_Tot
Junior Member

since 2007-08-31

Posts 42
Arkansas

0 posted 2007-09-07 11:28 AM

We saw each other at school,
We started dating,
I said I love you,
You said I love you too,
Always together,
Then I went on a trip,
You went to a friend's house,
Your friends asked if you wanted some,
You were foolish and accepted,
When it was time to leave you got in your car,
And went speeding down the road,
The road ended but your car didn't stop,
The grass was wet,
Your clothes were bloody,
You heard loud sirens,
I was called,
You were mangled,
I couldn't look,
How could you have been so foolish?
You loved me,
Then they took you away,
Your parents cry,
So did I,
You lost your love,
Worse, you took mine.

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

1 posted 2007-09-10 03:21 PM

worse you took mine~

Wow those words were so haunting. Very sad write. Welcome to Passions I hope you enjoy it here.
Krysti

RenaissanceRomanceRunsRed
Senior Member

since 2007-06-11

Posts 1062
In Love <3

2 posted 2007-09-10 08:58 PM

well ummm, it was good, and deeply sad. i hope things will turn in your favorite soon.

-Red

"I thought I'd just mention in passing . . . I always wanted a Sparkly of my very own." -Jeremy The Crow

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

3 posted 2007-09-11 11:14 AM

I loved the last line- but the whole thing was really good!

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