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surf_painter
Member

since 2007-04-10

Posts 434
Canada

0 posted 2007-09-02 11:13 PM

My mind pleads for you
But my shyness keeps you away
Still my body's acting crazy
I just wish you could see
The way my heart is beating wildly
And the soft touch of your skin
Sends schockwaves through mine
I want you to know
I feel safe with you
I may not say it
But I trust you
And all I want
Is to feel the smoothness of your skin again
To hold your hand
Once more
Your all that's natural to me
And I wish you could know

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

1 posted 2007-09-04 04:34 PM

Oh, I loved this. Been there, done that, probably going to do it again kinda thing. THis was really great. It says everything I've ever tried to say but couldn't, and so simply, so sweetly too. Going in my library. Absolutely loved it!

Rerra

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

2 posted 2007-09-04 04:35 PM

Oh, I loved this. Been there, done that, probably going to do it again kinda thing. THis was really great. It says everything I've ever tried to say but couldn't, and so simply, so sweetly too. Going in my library. Absolutely loved it!

Rerra

broken_smile1469
Member

since 2006-07-02

Posts 104

3 posted 2007-09-04 08:11 PM

great poem! I really can relate to this, it probably a lot of people can

well goooooood job! hope to read more from ya

"in a world of cheerios, be a fruit loop"

hunnie_girl

Member Elite

since 2006-06-18

Posts 2567
Canada

4 posted 2007-09-09 11:26 PM

oh this was so sweet I loved it.
Krysti

Tinsel
Junior Member

since 2007-06-04

Posts 36
UK

5 posted 2007-09-11 11:16 AM

Awww, sweet!
There's a typo in "shockwaves" (an extra c)
Just to tidy it up.

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