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pen&paper Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513
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Music is the most of my soul Its the one thing that keeps me whole When my life spins out of control I turn on the radio And then I don't feel so cold Music is the arms that hold me tight The voice that says "Everything will be alright" When I'm alone, In the dead of night The music's sound shines like a light Music is what will never abandon me Reminds me of the beauty That lives inside Then I don't feel Like I deserve to die [This message has been edited by pen&paper (03-26-2007 07:57 PM).] |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
Hmm .. I liked this. It was different, good different. I may be compltley wrong but I think "Music" would be a good title for obvious reasons. I don't think the title of this poem needs to be complicated. Belinda_* |
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pencil&paper Member
since 2006-09-09
Posts 76asleep somewhere in my head |
like i said before i really like this poem i think part of the reason for that is because i love music anyway good poem one of my favs  "Those who danced were thought to be quite insane by those who could not hear the music."~Angela Monet |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
Music is my life too I don't know what i would do without it. I liked how you expressed that all into a poem... hunnie ~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~ |
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surf_painter Member
since 2007-04-10
Posts 434Canada |
wow you captured what alot of us music lovers could never capture music is what helps me when i need some i like this one it may need to go in my library |
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