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Teen Poetry #8

(i dnt noe a title)

idntcareifudntcare
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
BC, Canada

0 posted 2007-03-06 07:18 PM

They want to help me
& I smile because no one really see
that i wont be happy
except if he hugs me real tight
or say that things will be alright.

xxx

unholyjudgement
Member

since 2007-02-27

Posts 116
Wherever my soul takes me next

1 posted 2007-03-14 09:15 AM

A title usually depends on ur inspiration.
Why did you write.
BTW nice words but a lil choppy

idntcareifudntcare
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
BC, Canada

2 posted 2007-03-14 07:41 PM

oh ohk thank u

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

3 posted 2007-03-14 09:26 PM

try this:

They want to help me
And I smile though no one really sees
that i wont be happy
Unless he holds me tight
And says everything will be alright.

good write. sry i couldn't help w/ the title

Pen

idntcareifudntcare
Junior Member

since 2006-10-18

Posts 18
BC, Canada

4 posted 2007-03-15 07:03 PM

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