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Auburn Burn
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Auburn Burn |
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Thebaer Junior Member
since 2007-03-18
Posts 10 |
Auburn burn lingers through my eyes When my mind tries to hide. These things are not worth the discord Who she is, Is all I need record Futile in reason But fair in purpose My mind delves into only surface My puddle to her sea I wish it so longingly Now nay Sayers Don’t deny my delight Only reject your narrow sight Only let he who know judge my plight Go now and remove from sight Anger clouds I digress Can it be? It’s yes Tell me where Fates fair to me On the stair I’ll be there. |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
Add more substance. The first eight sentences don't really make sense and neither to the ones that follow it. |
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