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hunnie_girl
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0 posted 2007-01-25 12:39 PM


I always fall in love too fast,
trying to fix what i know won't last,
or something that could never start,
it leaves me alone with a broken heart,

everyday I wish I was a little older,
I dream on cold nights of lying on your shoulder,
I can't get over how you make me feel,
you let me belive love can be real,

thanks for being my everything,
thanks for showing me how to spread my wings,
even though we've never met,
"come with me, and watch the sun set."



~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

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Walter Poe
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1 posted 2007-01-25 05:13 AM


Hey there you getting better or what one little thing hurt and heart sound to alike try alone instead of hurt.

To take a lot of pain,
take a lot of pain
Love is like a cloud,
holds a lot of rain

hunnie_girl
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2 posted 2007-01-25 11:10 PM


thanks Paul I had to go and read it over something I only usually do once and then I realized it too. So i changed it.
hunnie

~fool me once shame on you, fool me twice shame on me~

wwzwlmd8
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3 posted 2007-01-27 01:05 AM


I liked this poem and I can kind of relate to this beause I've fell in love to fast and got my heart broken.wwzwlmd8!!!!!!!!!!!


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