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chiLanta
Junior Member
since 2006-12-01
Posts 47


0 posted 2007-01-26 01:28 PM


I'm tired of fighting
Everyday something new
I love you to death boy
You are my only boo

but the pain you leave me to cry in
I'm so sick of having to deal
Back and forth round and round
I can't tell what is real

You tell me you love me
Believe me I know it is true
but you don't always show it
In Some of the things you do

I only ask a little of you
Not a million dollars or diamonds and gold
I just want you to respect my wishes
but when you don't babe it gets old

It hurts to cry a lot
I can't always be strong
I try and try my hardest
To know where I belong

and The tears aren't wiped away
They linger on inside
Tomorrow the same tears will fall
because I don't always have somewhere to run and hide

I know we're going to make it
Good times will come around
You got to feel pain and sorrow
To pick yourself up off the ground!


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wwzwlmd8
Member
since 2006-09-23
Posts 96
San Diego,CA
1 posted 2007-01-27 12:57 PM


This was a good poem and had a lot of meaning to it. I had to read some of the same line's and some times I got lost. It was a good poem a hope to read more from you. wwzwlmd8


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