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RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

0 posted 2006-11-07 07:58 PM

Ok Lately everypoem i put on this site just vanishes in thin air, so either nobody wants my poem's on here or their is a problem with the site..

A Flower Of Creativity

A flower opens in the morning sun
Shining brightly for a new day has begun
That flower lights the lives of us all
It shows us just what its like fall
To fall in love with life in every way
To breathe the earth everyday
Should that flower slowly die?
Live life knowing the reason why
The reason why we must take every possibility that comes along
As we travel on life’s journey singing our song.

Tempest
Member

since 2006-04-28

Posts 247
dont eat paint chips!!!!

1 posted 2006-11-07 08:03 PM

hey this was really amazing, was it for ella???? it was really....well...(mumble,mumble)cough cough ....cute....

Free_Spirit07
Member

since 2006-01-29

Posts 222
The middle of my mind!

2 posted 2006-11-07 10:28 PM

Hey there, WOW nice poem, I write SOOOO many, but never as happy, and nice like that. One day I hope to write with happy thoughts! Just to say, that it does seem that people hardly EVER comment on your poems, and it all seems a waste of time, but someone out there has read it, and it has left some sort of good feeling in their heart. Okay, much appreciated! bye

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Free_Spirit07
~%#*So far from perfect!*#%~
~%#*So far from life and living!*#%~

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

3 posted 2006-11-08 01:20 AM

Thanks Both...
Nice to see some new faces

rhia_5779
Senior Member

since 2006-06-09

Posts 1334
California

4 posted 2006-11-08 03:44 PM

It shows us just what its like fall

grammar!

This was all upbeat and good. I havent been on recently, alot cause my writing is not good recently and I am sick rite now and HW . I 'll read you writing when I am on . I normally do but I'm often not on.

Question . Hunnie,Bekah,Stargal,Ali you guys all disapeared he only ones it seem still her of old are TEmpest, me and REvengelsMine and she started posting in TEen like a month ago.

RevengeIsMine
Senior Member

since 2006-07-08

Posts 820
Australia

5 posted 2006-11-09 12:52 PM

Riha, i hope you get better soon!!

I actually got told yesterday that this poem had no meaning. I am out to prove this person wrong so you will see a few new poems now and then.. I have also been working on a story, not a long one but long enough he he he.. I am hoping to post this real soon...

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