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The Boy Next Door |
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RevengeIsMine Senior Member
since 2006-07-08
Posts 820Australia 
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The Boy Next Door I’m the one you want to see when you’re finally awake. I’m the one that will hold your hand and never be afraid I’m not a perfect princess or a pretty date. I’m the girl you used to know we used to be best mates. You’d laugh at all my jokes, you’d watch me paint my toes. You’d do everything a mate would do until that door began to close. I really, really liked you, if only id have said. You wouldn’t be with her, you’d be with me instead. |
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Tempest Member
since 2006-04-28
Posts 247dont eat paint chips!!!! |
so sad, sorry about your friend. i know how that feels....it seems like i always know how it feels and its perpetually ironic how this is how it happens...and by the way isnt it funny how people overuse the word"ironic" in the wrong tense or they just use it to sound like they know something?...not to say anyone here uses it too much, just sayin. sorry, got off track there for a sec. anyways im really sad about your friend and i really hope you patch things up. you know make the quilt whole again. This is the only life you have, so live it to be remembered |
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hunnie_girl
since 2006-06-18
Posts 2567Canada |
that was good i liked it a lot beautiful flow and the end was amazing. hope to read more soon... hunnie  A time to love, and a time to hate; a time of war and a time for peace ~Ecclesiastes 3:8~ |
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Belinda Member
since 2006-01-30
Posts 126UK |
That was really impressive. Short and sweet, I like the way you managed to say so much with so little. I can somewhat relate aswell. Keep it up Belinda ~ x |
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damo451 Junior Member
since 2006-12-29
Posts 18Western Australia |
Love this, It's so short, yet it tells everything, and you can really feel the emotion in it. ~Damo~ |
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broken_smile1469 Member
since 2006-07-02
Posts 104 |
cool poem i loved it i can totally relate great job! |
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hollygal Junior Member
since 2006-12-30
Posts 21Alberta, Canada |
Short, sweet and to the point. I love it. and i can also somewhat relate. Keep up the great work! |
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Clockwork_Orange Senior Member
since 2007-03-23
Posts 620Space Camp, IN |
haha, i can relate to this about as well as tempest can |
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Jaki H Member
since 2008-01-19
Posts 232NJ, USA |
oh g-d i know what ur talking about! i hate when that happens! really sweet poem and great message! xoxo, Jaki H |
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XxForever.BrokenxX Senior Member
since 2008-01-20
Posts 891Neverland |
Love this Jess. Great write. {~~*~~} (i think this is the shortest poem i've ever read by you. )"You are not loyal enough to eat my orange jelly beans....#} |
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BeyaK Member
since 2008-08-07
Posts 126Philippines |
this is a short yet a nice poem. so sad yet sweet... ~~*K. B.*~~ |
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