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TinaTrivett
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Up in arms
and out of breath
Running, skipping
cheating death
They'll unlock
the iron door
Cross the line
and kiss the floor
Feels the heat
upon his skin
Never to
go back again
© Copyright 2009 Tina Trivett - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
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1 posted 06-07-2009 04:47 PM       View Profile for Robert E. Jordan   Email Robert E. Jordan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert E. Jordan

Yo dear Tina,

You said it, never to go back again.

This is a very effective picture/poem combination.

Love Bobby
BluesSerenade
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2 posted 06-07-2009 06:19 PM       View Profile for BluesSerenade   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BluesSerenade

I can't even imagine the elation one must feel.
Your title says it all!!

I enjoy reading your poetry, Tina~
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Thank you both
 
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