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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-03-06 05:27 PM



They say I should not waste my time...
that you would never look at me;
they say that I am chasing rainbows; hoping, that there might just be
something there...
some hint, some clue...
some tiny spark to recognise...
other than my wishful thinking, soft reflected in your eyes...

Oh, but you are beautiful.


They say that I should put you from my mind...
no future here for me;
I should resist this sweet, enchanting, soft, bewitching fantasy.
They say you spin a web, so honey-sweet...
the strands, so silken fine;
but, I don't care... if there is, then, the slightest chance you could be mine...

Oh, but you are beautiful.


They say that you will play with me...
as would a wilful child, a toy;
until you tire of this, and seek some new diversion to enjoy.
They say you keep your lovers broken hearts, wrapped soft, in words unsaid...
in little Golden boxes; trapped forever,
round your perfumed bed...

Oh, but you are beautiful.


They say that you will break my heart,
as surely as night follows day.
But, then... it is my heart... my choice;
a price, I am prepared to pay;
for, what then, is the price to put on love?...
this breathless ecstasy;
this tightening of the throat...
this pounding heart, when you are close to me?...

Oh, but you are beautiful.


It may well be, what they say is all true...
I really do not care;
in truth, it really does not matter,
just so long as you are there;
and, if my heart should end up broken; this too, has its own virtue...
for, in a little Golden box,
I am, forever, close to you...

Oh, but you are beautiful.



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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-06 06:36 PM


Sometimes our fantasies can be ever so sweet and in them our heart never gets broken.

Your loving heart should never see the inside of a box ~ be it made of gold or otherwise.


Linda

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2009-03-06 06:45 PM


When I read a poem with good solid content that holds me to the end then it becomes a very satisfying read.
This was that read.

Hope she doesn't run out of little golden boxes or space around that perfumed bed.

Get a pre nup signed and head down golden box road. Maybe you'll meet Dorothy on the way and pick up a heart and some courage.

Liked this very much.

Eric

pontyjim
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since 2009-03-06
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3 posted 2009-03-06 07:05 PM


Very well written indeed. Solid images, good meter. Very nice.
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4 posted 2009-03-07 01:36 AM


"They say that you will break my heart,
as surely as night follows day.
But, then... it is my heart... my choice;
a price, I am prepared to pay;
for, what then, is the price to put on love?...
this breathless ecstasy;
this tightening of the throat...
this pounding heart, when you are close to me?...

Oh, but you are beautiful.


It may well be, what they say is all true...
I really do not care;
in truth, it really does not matter,
just so long as you are there;
and, if my heart should end up broken; this too, has its own virtue...
for, in a little Golden box,
I am, forever, close to you..."

I have someone I have said this about too
and yes, men can be so so beautiful

Temptress
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since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136
Mobile, AL
5 posted 2009-03-07 02:07 AM


Hello there. This is a beautifully sweet poem. Enjoyed

"...buried way beneath the sheets
I think she's having a meltdown..."
"Buckcherry"

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