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tao power
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0 posted 2009-03-07 04:43 AM


How do we react when whole cities collapse
and all that is left is a dirty old crack
where nobody lives and nobody goes
except a stray dog and some wild old ghosts?

What do we do when it all comes undone
All that we fought for and all that we won
as it all falls around us, what is the plan?
Go back to the start.
United We Stand.


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1 posted 2009-03-07 04:56 AM


I say the Pledge of Allegiance still with pride - and would happily make this the second half.

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Margherita
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2 posted 2009-03-07 06:20 AM


It is indeed in times of disaster that a pledge of allegiance is tested. To begin again, united, is a wise suggestion.

You did a good job here.

Love,
Margherita

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