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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2009-03-05 02:08 PM



The Currency of our Lives (thanks to steavenr)

Unspoken words
navigate flexibility
beyond their shadowed reflections
knowing the currency of emotions
that flow from your love.


M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-05 02:50 PM


Profound thoughts in a powerful presentation.
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-03-05 05:20 PM


In less than 20, you managed to pack a lot in!

I'd offer you a 'penny' for your thoughts ~ but they are worth their weight in gold!

Warm hug,
Linda

Margherita
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3 posted 2009-03-05 06:34 PM


Very deep reflections in less than 20, dear Maureen!

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2009-03-07 12:58 PM


I like what you say and I like how you say it.

Alison

Oklahoma Rose
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5 posted 2009-03-07 07:53 AM


Maureen, you wrote so much in so few words. And, it is so beautiful at that.
2islander2
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6 posted 2009-03-07 03:56 PM


thanks for the enjoyable read.

yann

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
7 posted 2009-03-07 05:16 PM


Kacy and Linda, thank you for your thoughts They are appreciated.

Margherita, sometimes I like to try out some less than 20's as I miss the one who started them!


Alison, thank you. We had some  very cold weather and snow this week that made me think of you. Today it turned 70 degrees.
What a change!

Sue, as always thanks!

Yann, thank you for stopping by and reading.

M

Noel
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8 posted 2009-03-07 10:31 PM


Shadowed reflections is such a unique thought, as well as the idea of currency in our lives which applies to so many things, and more importantly about spending it wisely.

Nice little poem.


JamesMichael
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9 posted 2009-03-07 11:27 PM


Very nice...James
Bill Charles
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10 posted 2009-03-07 11:33 PM


Maureen - for 18 words you surely pack a wallop. As always....

BC

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