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Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
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Ohio

0 posted 2009-02-14 12:25 PM




Cupid Has A Crooked Arrow

You have eyes for that pretty little girl
Blond curls and crystal clear blue eyes
A sexy little walk and dimples with a friendly smile
She gives you the eye then says we’re friends
But that little ole arrow of cupids hits the dog
She follows you around the house with stars in her eyes
She sits on your lap, gives you a doggy kiss
True love, friends, true love.
Now that little ole cupid is just a babe
How can he shoot that ole arrow properly?
Now down the street is this little ole sexy dreamboat
Tall, slender, muscles all in the right places
Twinkling eyes, a drop dead smile
A slight British accent, upper class
Now here comes that baby , his diaper a hangin’ low
Wham!
He hits the little ole man next door
Poor man can hardly walk, but he thinks he a dashing
Romeo
Flashing a toothless smile and exhaling his drop dead
breath
I keep a tellin’ ya
Watch out for that little ole babe cause he keeps a shootin’
those little ole crooked arrows.
Watch out, watch out, here he comes
Oh! No! He just hit an elephant
Run!

Hugs
BonBon

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-02-14 01:51 PM


Yo BonBon,

This one hits the mark, I loves it.

Love Bobby

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-02-14 02:56 PM


BonBon, I would suggest you sit that little cherub down with a big box of chocolate Bon-Bons, and let him rest a bit until his aim is straight and true!

This was cute ~ just like you!

Happy Valentine's Day
Linda Lou

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2009-02-14 04:16 PM


Heh heh this is just too cute. Made me smile with pleasure.

Eric

Bill Charles
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since 2000-07-11
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highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-02-14 04:35 PM


Bonnie j - yikes, just ran into that elephant and he's a chasing me down the road...

BC

Bonnie j
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since 2003-06-27
Posts 1588
Ohio
5 posted 2009-02-14 06:32 PM


Hello everyone

So glad you enjoyed my little cupid. He sure is something else.
Smiles and hugs coming your way.
BonBon

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6 posted 2012-05-20 07:39 PM


i met an angel with a toothless smile, and a soul as good as heavens a heart so loving and kind,

My spirit will rise
above the sea~
There will be no drowning
of my soul or me~

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