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markita
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since 2009-02-11
Posts 7
washington

0 posted 2009-02-11 11:21 PM


Behind my smile lies plies of cries
The one that carried me for 9 months
9 long months
Never knew being in her wound
Ready to bloom
That my life would cause so many sad wones
That she would be ADDICTED to
Something so strong
Stronger than her own pride
That can make her die


That made me cry
The one that changed my pampers
The one that held me tight when I have nightmares
ADDICTED.
Never knew one day
She would become my nightmare
DAME.
She lost her pride
Her pride to something so strong…
Something that can kill her
That makes her all ugly inside
That makes me want 2 hide…
That makes me want to die..
Dame the one that carried me for 9 months
9 long months
ADDICTED…2 DRUGS


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Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-02-12 08:29 AM


Welcome to Pip, dear markita!

A sad first entry, it shows your pain for your Mother. No, don't hide, she loves you even in this difficult time, when she is crossing her own dark valley. Show her that you care, it is still the best therapy you know!

And the sun will shine again one day.

Love,
Margherita

Midnitesun
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-02-12 06:43 PM


Welcome to Pips, Markita.
It's a hard rock life pathway you've described.
Wishing you well, and that she seeks help to end the drug addictions.

Suncleaver
Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
3 posted 2009-02-12 07:12 PM


I lost my fiancee to heroin, you must convince her to seek help. It's the only chance you'll get, you can't beat drugs alone, she needs you and she needs professional help.

Don't give up.

And welcome, my friend.

Never sigh for a better world, it's already composed, played and told.

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
4 posted 2009-02-12 07:15 PM


markita - read this with sadness. Too, too many are in the same situation due to drugs... Wish you well...

BC

HelmutB
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since 2000-01-06
Posts 964
Canada
5 posted 2009-02-12 10:55 PM


sad it is but don't give up. Never do

The ability to describe life with words is similar to painting a picture; both can be powerful tools.  


Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
6 posted 2009-02-18 09:04 AM


A very passionate writing...
I'm glad you could get this out.

Welcome to Passions!
Please, check your email for a
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" It matters not this distance now  " Excerpt, Yesterday's Love
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KRJ

Boshii2
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since 2009-02-01
Posts 146

7 posted 2009-02-20 10:50 AM


helloooooooo and welcome.
Except for the theme I like your style
"plies of cries " is good.
Really liked your whole first verse...looking forward to seeing your next effort. Boshii2

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