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gdcod2player
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0 posted 2009-02-11 10:17 PM



The storm fills the sky
The girl I kept in my sights
Has the dust left my eyes?
The snow that’s rarely been
The ten years for just one sight
The girl I would like to find
She’s rare to me
She’s rare to me
The one girl I would take away to find one sun
The girl I want to show the stars to tonight
(i'm not happy with this one, didnt turn out how i wanted it but i dont know how i wanted it to turn out)

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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429
In your dreams
1 posted 2009-02-11 11:43 PM


(: Keep it up!!!

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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