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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-02-09 11:08 AM

Let's do it !

with or without eyes
shoes or stockinged
at the edge of the car
in the green of the fields
in the rows at the Shoprite
in the corners of the
7-11

Let's do it !
on the 1 or on the 2
on parquet
or on laminate

on the spring of
our summer
on the toss of
the golden apple blossoms

Let's do it with feeling
with funk and with glee

save the intervention
of introspection

Lets turn up the voice
and shout out the
darkening hours

in a pattern of we

shake my hips
round your tree

Lets do it !

with or without
mariachi.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-02-09 11:21 AM

Like this poem it's quirky and different
Excellent..

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

2 posted 2009-02-09 02:52 PM

Do what?!? lol

This adorable poem puts the funnin' in the lovin'!

Linda

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

3 posted 2009-02-09 04:16 PM

Michele - ok, I'm ready. Thought provoking write...

BC

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-02-09 06:05 PM

quote:
on the spring of
our summer
on the toss of
the golden apple blossoms

That would be my favorite place! Wonderfully uplifting, dear Michele!

Had to look up "mariachi" and I think it fits my idea of dancing. To come think of it I do it almost exclusively in the kitchen and with the cat as partner!

Anyway, whatever IT is, let's do IT, it has got to do with love and kisses, and Michele knows what she is talking about!

Effervescent.

Love,
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2009-02-16 05:15 AM

Wow Michele, now you got me looking for stockings down the 7-11 aisles...

So far, I haven't found any (dang it!).

Yes sometime, the words just get in the way,
of lovespeak.

I think I need another Slurpee!
Either that or a Big Gulp.

Oklahoma Rose
Senior Member

since 2008-02-28

Posts 1586
Oklahoma USA

6 posted 2009-02-17 10:13 PM

A very well written poem. Uh, do what? Or, should I ask? LOL!

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