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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-02-17 10:09 AM


Bones has been bedded down
and raped
by so many clients
that he’s lost track of the number.  

He continues to scream and cry,
but it’s only for effect.  

He no longer means it,
but he knows the clients
like and expect it.  

Why they do
like and expect it
remains a mystery to Bones.

Bobby

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viking_metal
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1 posted 2009-02-17 10:35 AM


Bones has got it rough.


There's always a bowl of "Chunky Soup" at my house waiting for Bones.


-P

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

Marc-Andre
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2 posted 2009-02-17 10:43 AM


A powerful exposition of sadism, and the survival response to it. Chilling! Mark
Juju
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3 posted 2009-02-17 10:50 AM


Sad

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-02-17 11:40 AM


Thanks Paul,

Thanks for the more than kind offer.  

Bones loves "Chunky Soup", and so do I.

AS you may know, Bones doesn't go anywhere without me.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-02-17 11:45 AM


Thanks Mark,

As you know, Bones knows all about survival.  He knows every survival trick in the book.

I'm pleased that you found the poem powerful.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-02-17 11:46 AM


Thanks dear Juju,

For reading and commenting.

Love Bobby

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2009-02-17 02:20 PM


Reading.
      Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-02-17 02:31 PM


Thanks dear Ida,

For reading.

Love Bobby

passing shadows
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9 posted 2009-02-17 08:14 PM


darn Bobby....it makes me so sad to read you

can't you write of happy things?


Robert E. Jordan
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10 posted 2009-02-17 08:56 PM


Thanks dear Passing shadows,

Sorry my work makes you sad Hon.  I write what I know.

Love Bobby

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