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The Recurrent Shadow of a Winter's Day

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icebox
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in the shadows


0 posted 01-10-2009 12:03 PM       View Profile for icebox   Email icebox   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for icebox



glazed branches bending

time holds frozen memories

ice pale sky weeping

2009 by icebox
© Copyright 2009 icebox - All Rights Reserved
TinaTrivett
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1 posted 01-10-2009 12:14 PM       View Profile for TinaTrivett   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for TinaTrivett

Beautiful...just lovely.

Love your tee also...lol.
Anniepimm
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2 posted 01-10-2009 12:33 PM       View Profile for Anniepimm   Email Anniepimm   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Anniepimm's Home Page   View IP for Anniepimm

I love the short poems and i like this one
Thank you for sharing
Midnitesun
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Gaia


3 posted 01-10-2009 01:33 PM       View Profile for Midnitesun   Email Midnitesun   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Midnitesun

I can SEE and FEEL this.
steavenr
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4 posted 01-10-2009 03:38 PM       View Profile for steavenr   Email steavenr   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit steavenr's Home Page   View IP for steavenr

such vivid imagery in this one...lovely write...how it expresses the emotion!  loved it...
secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !


5 posted 01-10-2009 03:49 PM       View Profile for secondhanddreampoet   Email secondhanddreampoet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for secondhanddreampoet

VERY fine!

serious, sustained applause!!
Susan Caldwell
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6 posted 01-11-2009 12:08 AM       View Profile for Susan Caldwell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Susan Caldwell

Very nice.

what does Florida weep?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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7 posted 01-11-2009 05:23 AM       View Profile for Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Email Roniece Dawson-Bruce   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Roniece Dawson-Bruce

Wonderful imagery Mr Ice!   RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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Eternity


8 posted 01-11-2009 05:28 AM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Though the title speaks of shadows, your haiku is pure LIGHT.

Love this much.

Love,
Margherita
1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace


9 posted 01-13-2009 04:46 PM       View Profile for 1slick_lady   Email 1slick_lady   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit 1slick_lady's Home Page   View IP for 1slick_lady

tonight the moon cries
alone in a lonely voice
singing of winter
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light


10 posted 01-15-2009 09:47 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

Dear Box of Ice, this is a nice slice of ice!

Excellent!!!!!

Giving you a an extra warm hug!
EA
Marchmadness
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11 posted 01-18-2009 05:53 AM       View Profile for Marchmadness   Email Marchmadness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marchmadness

Now that's a fine haiku!
                    ida
iliana
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12 posted 01-21-2009 11:35 PM       View Profile for iliana   Email iliana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for iliana

If I were an artist, this haiku would have inspired a painting.  
ethome
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13 posted 01-21-2009 11:41 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Excellent concise summary.

Thought provoking.

Eric
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14 posted 10-08-2010 06:51 AM       View Profile for Cpat Hair   Email Cpat Hair   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cpat Hair

captures the chill as well as the shadows sir....

well done indeed
 
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