The Recurrent Shadow of a Winter's Day

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Open Poetry #44

The Recurrent Shadow of a Winter's Day

icebox
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in the shadows

0 posted 2009-01-10 12:03 PM

glazed branches bending

time holds frozen memories

ice pale sky weeping

©2009 by icebox

TinaTrivett
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1 posted 2009-01-10 12:14 PM

Beautiful...just lovely.

Love your tee also...lol.

Anniepimm
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England

2 posted 2009-01-10 12:33 PM

I love the short poems and i like this one
Thank you for sharing

Midnitesun

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Gaia

3 posted 2009-01-10 01:33 PM

I can SEE and FEEL this.

steavenr
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4 posted 2009-01-10 03:38 PM

such vivid imagery in this one...lovely write...how it expresses the emotion! loved it...

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

5 posted 2009-01-10 03:49 PM

VERY fine!

serious, sustained applause!!

Susan Caldwell
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Florida

6 posted 2009-01-11 12:08 PM

Very nice.

what does Florida weep?

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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Sydney, Australia

7 posted 2009-01-11 05:23 AM

Wonderful imagery Mr Ice!

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Margherita
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Eternity

8 posted 2009-01-11 05:28 AM

Though the title speaks of shadows, your haiku is pure LIGHT.

Love this much.

Love,
Margherita

1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

9 posted 2009-01-13 04:46 PM

tonight the moon cries
alone in a lonely voice
singing of winter

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light

10 posted 2009-01-15 09:47 AM

Dear Box of Ice, this is a nice slice of ice!

Excellent!!!!!

Giving you a an extra warm hug!
EA

Marchmadness
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So. El Monte, California

11 posted 2009-01-18 05:53 AM

Now that's a fine haiku!
ida

iliana
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USA

12 posted 2009-01-21 11:35 PM

If I were an artist, this haiku would have inspired a painting.

ethome
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New Brunswick Canada

13 posted 2009-01-21 11:41 PM

Excellent concise summary.

Thought provoking.

Eric

Cpat Hair

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14 posted 2010-10-08 06:51 AM

captures the chill as well as the shadows sir....

well done indeed

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