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Teen Poetry #1

I know you

CelticKat
Junior Member

since 1999-09-20

Posts 22
St augustine Florida

0 posted 1999-09-20 01:35 PM

I know you
I embrace your thoughts
With an open mind.
The moon is pulling at us.
You say it is just a figment
Of my heart.
Maybe it is who cares?

You turn away from me Afraid of love.
What is so wrong with me?
What takes the place?
Of love in your soul?

Let lose don't turn away.
I hear the angels and devils
On our lips. We can't hide the
Eclipse of loves expression.
Why do you turn away?
Just let lose.

Tillie

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Act your shoe size.

And let your self be free. just be you.

StratMatt
Member

since 1999-09-19

Posts 87
Macomb, IL, U.S.A.

1 posted 1999-09-20 10:04 PM

Good poem. It makes me think what would scare a person away from love.
Maybe the person you write about had a terrible past experience, because that's the only thing that I could think of, having fallen in love once, that would scare me away from the awesome feeling of being in love with a person.
-Matt

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"Lost time is never found again." -Ben Franklin.

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