How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Today's Topics p Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives
   Nav Win
 Discussion
 Feelings
 Do i or don't i?
 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9
Follow us on Facebook

 Moderated by: Alwye   (Admins )

 
User Options
Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Not Available
Admin Print Send ECard
Passions in Poetry

Do i or don't i?

 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
Lisann
Member
since 01-31-2001
Posts 359


0 posted 08-24-2003 12:43 AM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

Hey guys...i have a favour to ask....at this point and time there is alot of pain in my life.  I don't really want to get into details about it but a lot of  trauma and hurt has occurred in my life over the last 6 months.  During that period,  I caused a lot of hurt to someone i care so very much about.  A friend that I dearly love and am in serious danger of losing......I posted a poem in open,  I have not yet shared it with her but i was thinking about it.  Will someone please read it and let me know what they think.  It is a rather  "powerful" piece.   Free verse,  which i never really do but it felt right for this piece.  Anyway,  the woman that I wrote it for is a very loving woman but she and I never really discuss our personal feelings with one another.  We both know that the other cares but we've never really talked about it.  I'm wondering if maybe the piece may be too  intense and shouldn't be shared.....let me know what you think please.

[This message has been edited by Lisann (08-24-2003 07:03 PM).]

Nan
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 05-20-99
Posts 24426
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA


1 posted 08-24-2003 09:01 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

This would be most easily done if you would post the URL of that poem here, Lisann...
Ringo
Deputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 10 ToursDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 TourDeputy Moderator 1 Tour
Member Elite
since 02-20-2003
Posts 3696
Saluting with misty eyes


2 posted 08-24-2003 09:41 AM       View Profile for Ringo   Email Ringo   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ringo

Lisann-
TELL HER NOW!!!!!!!!!!!
Show her the poem, call her on the phone, send her smoke signals, do whatever it takes...
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum64/HTML/001159.html

This was written to a "friend" that we both knew how the other felt,and know she is feeling it with another man because I didn't say anything, and she didn't know...

SAY IT NOW!!!!!!!!

We are all equal but we’re individually different
and able to reach the impossible if we try.

Lisann
Member
since 01-31-2001
Posts 359


3 posted 08-24-2003 01:58 PM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

Thank you Ringo......it was something written last night as i realized how much I was missing my friend......We've always had a closeness to us that we don't really share with others.  We have one of those friendships where.......words aren't really necessary......you just know.  But,  due to a mistake in judgement that I made.....our friendship is suffering.
Ron
Administrator
Member Rara Avis
since 05-19-99
Posts 9708
Michigan, US


4 posted 08-24-2003 02:38 PM       View Profile for Ron   Email Ron   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Ron's Home Page   View IP for Ron

LOL. You did REALLY well getting the link into your post, Lisann. Except it's not the right link?

You need to be ON the page you want them to arrive at before you copy the URL. I'm guessing that would be the poem, rather than the page where you were editing the post?
magic_612
Member
since 07-31-2003
Posts 197
NB, Canada


5 posted 08-24-2003 03:55 PM       View Profile for magic_612   Email magic_612   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for magic_612

that poem is beautiful and I can tell it really came from the heart. Tell your friend NOW how you feel and dont put it off. I lost 3 close friends from high school.. and I didnt take the time to fix it, please don't make the same mistake. Best of luck and thanks for sharing.
Lisann
Member
since 01-31-2001
Posts 359


6 posted 08-24-2003 07:02 PM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

ha ha.....I just noticed my error.....duh.....ok lets try this again....please check out this piece for me and let me know your opinion.
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum81/HTML/001513.html


Thank you
Lisann
Member
since 01-31-2001
Posts 359


7 posted 08-24-2003 07:04 PM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

hey Ron.....i think they call that a blone link......lol.
Lisann
Member
since 01-31-2001
Posts 359


8 posted 08-26-2003 10:03 PM       View Profile for Lisann   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lisann

For those of you that took the time to read and respond .....Thank you.  At this point,  I am intending to give it to her on her birthday which is on saturday.  If anyone else would like to read it and let me know their opinion as to whether or not i should give it to her.....please feel free to do so and let me know your opinion.  Thank you.
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum81/HTML/001513.html
Maddy vanD
Member
since 09-06-2003
Posts 101
Newfoundland, Canada


9 posted 09-07-2003 01:29 AM       View Profile for Maddy vanD   Email Maddy vanD   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Maddy vanD

Dear God!!!
Why on earth would you even consider Not showing her the poem. I realise I am posting this late, but I sincerely hope you did give her the poem.
it is a beautiful appology, simply beatiful

Maddy
Poetry is not pretty....poetry is real

 
 Post A Reply Post New Topic   Go to the Next Oldest/Previous Topic Return to Topic Page Go to the Next Newest Topic 
All times are ET (US) Top
  User Options
>> Discussion >> Feelings >> Do i or don't i? Format for Better Printing EMail to a Friend Not Available
Print Send ECard

 

pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Today's Topics | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary



© Passions in Poetry and netpoets.com 1998-2013
All Poetry and Prose is copyrighted by the individual authors