Hey guys...i have a favour to ask....at this point and time there is alot of pain in my life. I don't really want to get into details about it but a lot of trauma and hurt has occurred in my life over the last 6 months. During that period, I caused a lot of hurt to someone i care so very much about. A friend that I dearly love and am in serious danger of losing......I posted a poem in open, I have not yet shared it with her but i was thinking about it. Will someone please read it and let me know what they think. It is a rather "powerful" piece. Free verse, which i never really do but it felt right for this piece. Anyway, the woman that I wrote it for is a very loving woman but she and I never really discuss our personal feelings with one another. We both know that the other cares but we've never really talked about it. I'm wondering if maybe the piece may be too intense and shouldn't be shared.....let me know what you think please.
[This message has been edited by Lisann (08-24-2003 07:03 PM).]