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wordwizard
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on the way to next world

0 posted 2006-09-27 05:51 PM




Outside an artistic domain
hundreds shivered in the cold
held candles in glasses
twinkled in rows
on a red carpet walk
to an artist's rooftop

for the gathered goods
a mix of trendy gentry
spiced with a homeless few
raised friendly glasses
commented on how they knew
the artist that is
what it meant for them
to share a painted exhibit
to see the man perform

Outside they shivered
filed up steeple steps
all for a crooked look
what it means to observe
yet to be seen
through viewfinders
just being in another
person's way
an alien space
is occupied again...
til fans spiral away
charmed
or delluded


© Copyright 2006 Martin Dansky - All Rights Reserved
Enchantress
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Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-09-27 05:55 PM


A most excellent write Martin.
I may not always have time to reply..
but, I always read you!
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines
2 posted 2006-09-27 06:02 PM


charmed or delluded...I liked it either way...and have been there before


M

ChePacifica
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since 2006-09-26
Posts 58
Ignore Alien Orders
3 posted 2006-09-27 06:20 PM


very cool I enjoyed this alot
Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2006-09-28 12:03 PM


Dear Wizard of Words, your descriptive imagery has me wanting to put on a sweater because of the chill I am unexpectedly experiencing!

A very vivid vignette!

Warm hug,
EA



Kira Aso
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since 2006-09-26
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Closer to Hell...
5 posted 2006-09-28 12:14 PM


I love it! Something new and fresh. Kind of like winters first snow..
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