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william foos
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since 2006-09-13
Posts 77
schenectady,new york,usa

0 posted 2006-09-27 05:05 PM



there are
gifts to be
made simple
in the eyes
of the creator
he likes what comes
from the heart
and not from the
pocket book
like if you
were to pick
up a beautiful
stone
and give it
to the creator
he will bless
you as you have
blessed him
give back to
him that has
given you life

i see what i write and write what i see

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Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
1 posted 2006-09-27 05:08 PM


Beautiful wise words.
And so very very true.
Much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

~Autumn, the year's last, loveliest smile~

Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-09-27 07:59 PM


like if you
were to pick
up a beautiful
stone
and give it
to the creator
he will bless
you as you have
blessed him

~*~

It is
this simple, William,
as you have stated.

And Sir?  I thoroughly enjoy
your critique message.

Welcome to Passions!


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