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Nikerlz
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since 2006-08-31
Posts 37
California

0 posted 2006-09-03 08:01 PM


Im leaving you behind

Or maybe Im leading myself blind



Im leaving you behind

Because I thought you would always be mine



Im leaving you behind

So you can have your moment to shine



You left me behind

You left me for the very last time



They say nothing lasts forever

But they say never say never



They say nothing lasts forever

But one day I know well be together



Did you die?

Or did you find death to be a lie?



I will see you again

I just dont know when it begins



I will see you again

I just dont know how it ends



I will see you again

I will see you my forgotten friend


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pen&paper
Senior Member
since 2006-06-06
Posts 513

1 posted 2006-09-04 08:50 PM


wow..............................................................no seriously...................wow.....GREAT WRITE!!!!


Toodles!

Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
2 posted 2006-09-04 08:52 PM



This can be seen both as an internal write,
and an external acknowledgement of growth.

I have to agree with Pen&Paper...it's a good write!


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