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themute
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0 posted 2006-12-03 06:26 PM



Usurped is my steadfast sail and ship;
Uncouth was the tepid blood within our hearts—
Thou holdith this the highest.

Believed and crossed, our limitations grow;
My heavy mind hath broken floors for thou—
Yet only in its waiting.

Golden is the shore we long created in our
Dream-to-hold-a-candle; I dreamt longer—
Though mine eyes hath never closed.    

I am the two-toed wanderer

© Copyright 2006 Matthew Patrick Holbert - All Rights Reserved
Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2006-12-03 06:32 PM


Matthew.... this is stunning!

Be well
Roniece

passing shadows
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2 posted 2006-12-03 11:50 PM


outstanding!
trutodaraiders
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3 posted 2006-12-03 11:58 PM


Good job. I liked this poem very much
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