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The Lady
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0 posted 2006-11-19 05:15 PM




in bed last night  
artemis
spoke to me of amazons

I said
I do not wish to speak of amazons
nor goddesses
I am weary
give me peace
she wrestled me
this woman of the hunt
captured me with her legs

and then
she spake

and would these amazons
take refuge
in the house of artemis
and would these full breasted
women but sit
and wait
till danger passed

I tell you now
these women
of heart  
of strength      
never waited  
never took refuge  
not from danger  
or love  
not from life or death  
nor even from themselves
these women set their eyes upon the roads  
upon the sun  
glanced upon marvels    
swung their chaste legs  
mounted clouds  
and rode

give me peace
I cried
yet
leave your legs
awhile

_________________

the temple of artemis
was said to be a place of refuge
for the amazons  
when some of zeus’ more rascally sons  
gave them agita    
artemis tells it differently


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Gentle Spirit
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1 posted 2006-11-19 05:20 PM


I tell you now
these women
of heart  
of strength      
never waited  
never took refuge  
not from danger  
or love  
not from life or death  
nor even from themselves
these women set their eyes upon the roads  
upon the sun  
glanced upon marvels    
swung their chaste legs  
mounted clouds  
and rode
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Good Lord Kate, you HAVE been reading my thoughts this day, and writing them.

Think I will just lay this pen down now and let it rest awhile...

geez...and You? It WAS most definately worth the wait.  

seek the flame within yourself
and let your soul be cleansed by
the fire of love.  Axel Ekenstierna

The Lady
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2 posted 2006-11-19 05:24 PM



gentle Donna
do NOT put your pen down
write what moves you
I think we have been
riding side by side
this day
upon clouds
perhaps

hugs sweet lady

Gentle Spirit
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3 posted 2006-11-19 05:36 PM


Perhaps, the chariots of the Gods
have picked us up,
wisped us into the heavens
and allowed us rest upon
the clouds of Mount Olympus
so that we might this day
look down upon the valleys
and with contentment,
smile, with sigh.  

(excuse me for intruding Kate, your inspiring me today!!)

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4 posted 2006-11-19 06:17 PM


With legs that reach the heavens, piercing
the snow of clouds........alluring, suculent,
...sheesh.......

Pressie
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5 posted 2006-11-19 07:45 PM


"these women set their eyes upon the roads  
upon the sun  
glanced upon marvels    
swung their chaste legs  
mounted clouds  
and rode"

Nicely done my Lady!

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6 posted 2006-11-19 09:09 PM


all I can say is wow
amberhues
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7 posted 2006-11-19 09:11 PM


I'm with P.S.!  WOW is correct!!
The Lady
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8 posted 2006-11-19 11:25 PM



gentle Donna  
wherever we are  
it has been a pleasure  
smile    
you’re not intruding  
you have been an inspiration for me too
sorry ‘bout that wait


sheesh is what I said too Barry  
thank you    

thank you Pressie  
almost as nice as riding a harley

thank you kindly Dixie

thank you amberhues


Dark Stranger
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9 posted 2006-11-20 07:19 AM


ladyone, can ya send me the address of this place or better yet show me?..they must need a handy man around to fix those little things here and there..(grin) ladyone, you do weave magic with your pen
The Lady
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10 posted 2006-11-20 03:16 PM


Stranger darlin’  
we can go together  
meet me very late tonight  
bring two hot pastrami sandwiches  
two bottles of dr brown’s cream soda  
we will read about the temple of artemis  

wait
there is one thing I forgot to mention
tell you when you get here

thank you


Martie
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11 posted 2006-11-20 03:54 PM


Dear Lady...I love it..."leave me your legs", indeed!!  
The Lady
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12 posted 2006-11-20 04:07 PM




thank you
dear Martie
  

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13 posted 2006-11-20 04:26 PM


I do love this piece ...

Fool, said my Muse to me, look in thy heart and write.

wredgranny
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14 posted 2006-11-20 06:06 PM


and would these amazons
take refuge
in the house of artemis
and would these full breasted
women but sit
and wait
till danger passed

Howa! And a war cry! I think they might not wait but chase the danger into the sunset eh?
I like this very much Lady it stirs the blood to battle,and you sleepy still?lol!


  granny!

The Lady
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15 posted 2006-11-20 06:53 PM





‘loper
thank you very much


nope granny
wide awake now
thanks for the war cry
lol

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