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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Harbor 'lights' the moon shines.... upon the sea...upon the shore beyond the lighting of the lamps... inviting harbor serendipitous sanctuary of small ships sleeping the moon whispers... lyrics from a distant shore reminding us... where we’d rather be.... in a ‘different’ world! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
secondhanddreampoet Than dream neath the light of the moon. Enjoyed |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Bruce...your poem's imagery of water, moon and harbor...lovely in any time or place to me.  |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This verse is one of my very favorites, so vast and wondrous speaks the heart...to this inspiration...please see Whisperin' Shores. *S* |
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wredgranny Member
since 2006-11-18
Posts 493Ky. USA |
where we’d rather be.... in a ‘different’ world! Siyo Secondhanddream You paint a beautiful picture with your words,I love the night with moonlight making magical this sometimes sad world.Your words are filled with beauty and magic,sigi!
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
exquisite imagery, Bruce! |
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Pressie Member
since 2006-11-14
Posts 157Oklahoma |
Nicely done! Just passing through this world... Omnia vincit amor |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you all so much!..... [just some of my semi-minimalist 'impressionism'] |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
"small ships sleeping" you do have a way of leaving an impression Bruce I love this impression |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Imagine that different path of a world being one where there were no planes, train, buses, autos........carriages.....horses, etc... and what the sky would look like every night of the year (sans clouds, of course)... Nice pic.... |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
Well done! |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
"serendipitous sanctuary of small ships sleeping" Wonderful alliteration here Bruce. I could not help but here the song "Harbor Lights" as I read... Now that song will play over and over all night. Well done!! Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"serendipitous sanctuary" yes...precisely! an alliteration aside: poetically powerful presentation! |
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