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Open Poetry #39

The Perfect Dream

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

0 posted 2006-10-26 09:10 PM

After a short break i'm back..heh...had to study a little...

Here we go,

The Perfect Dream

dreams
i like to write
about my dreams a lot

after some years dreaming
and writing about them
i could imagine
the perfect dream
with all the best ideas
the best feelings
and landscapes
with sunny lakes
and endless green fields
a small time
in a perfect world

all was there
blue skyes
a big moon at night
clear lakes

all was there
and i dreamt about it
many times

but then i noticed
something was missing
you, you were missing
i didn't think about you in my dreams!
how fool of me to forget you

i imagined the dream again
and included you
in my personal paradise

but i couldn't dream about it
i just couldn't
many nights i tried
but nothing happened

one night i understood
i could dream the first dream
because sunny lakes
endless fields
and beautiful landscapes
do exist in the real world

but, unfortunately,
that dream was not perfect
you were missing

i couldn't dream
the second dream
'cause the idea of you and i together
just cannot exist
'cause it doesn't exist in the real world
after all, dreams are a reflection of reality

now i can't dream my perfect dream
i can't dream the perfect dream
because you are not here next to me
to make it reality

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2006-10-27 09:41 AM

This is lovely, I love dreams too ... especially those of magnificent nature.

I think, dear poet, that things are the other way around though!! What you think of, dream of, will manifest in your life ... Thoughts are energy that will materialize ... Remember and go on dreaming!

Love,
Margherita

DreamerSpirit
Member

since 2006-10-02

Posts 240
Buenos Aires, Argentina

2 posted 2006-10-27 08:26 PM

thanks for replying..
well, some of my dreams have are very detailed..and involve nature and such..
i'm glad you enjoyed!.
Denis.

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