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Word Dance |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
I want to write but I can’t find the words I thought that they had failed me And then I realized that I have failed them. They exist in all their beauty Each syllable a musical note Every nuance paints an image That I can not seem to capture I want to write but each word flits away They are on my fingertips, within my grasp Yet, they flirt and dart from the page I am left with tauntinging beauty That escapes my pen But lingers in my mind And dances on the tip of my tongue. aziza |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I know  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms az...pick up just a leaf from anywhere and see the world of words printed on the underside dare you!! enjoyed this |
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playing.with.crayons Member
since 2006-01-02
Posts 362Neverland |
Darn those tyrant things! Don't you just want to snatch them all up and cram them in your mouth so they can't get away... Probably should have had a question mark there. Enjoyed this write aziza ~cheye xx |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Alison, I know this feeling so well. Nicley done! |
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skaterfreak New Member
since 2006-10-12
Posts 4Kentucky,America |
Deep...Awesome ¢¾[[A][M][B][E][R]]¢¾ |
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The Lady Member Rara Avis
since 2005-12-26
Posts 7634The Southwest |
dance your words aziza begin with adagio dance till you reach allegro the words will fly from the tip of your tongue and dance on their own... I really like this poem and those flirting words |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
This dances a song I seem to have heard! Oooh, it just drives me crazy when I can't think of how to express what I want to say. How I can relate to your poem, Aziza! miscellanea |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
passing shadows - Funny how words elude us, isn't it? _________________________________________ Dark, I think that words, like fairies, dance on the underside of those leaves. They are there -- we just have to listen to their music. __________________________________________ playing.with.crayons, They taste so tangy on our tongues -- I'd write more, but I can't type with my mouth full. __________________________________________ Gentle Spirit, Thank you for understanding. __________________________________________ skaterfreak, Welcome to PiP and thank you for reading - and enjoying - my poem. ___________________________________________ Lady, Your response is poetry and makes my imagination soar. Lovely Lady. ____________________________________________ miscellanea, I am thrilled that you feel this too - words are so elusive and their mystery weaves in their escape. Yes? ____________________________________________ xoxoxo to you all. |
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