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1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2006-10-12 07:29 AM

I Wear You

could we be more than what we are
the spaces between cracks on a sidewalk
a shadow made in the play of long and short
where light had been blocked by an object
I shiver when I think of you walking in mine
I should’ve could’ve waited, waited forever
to place your hand to my lips, to my heart
something exists and is always present
more than outside lines traces of a silhouette
bending to places no one else could touch
cast from one forming a simple shade
where time brought brilliant color
and filled in the void with sunset hues
to become something so beautiful
I wear you like an invisible tattoo
where the dye darkens this truth daily
written so clearly upon my life and my heart

“all romantics meet the same fate”…Joni Mitchell

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

1 posted 2006-10-12 07:51 AM

how gorgeous!

just the words I needed to read before I start my day today

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2006-10-12 07:58 AM

ms slick..daymmmm makes me wish

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2006-10-12 08:14 AM

LOVE THIS Helen. Beautiful!!

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14

Posts 35113
Canada eh.

4 posted 2006-10-12 09:19 AM

"I wear you like an invisible tattoo
where the dye darkens this truth daily
written so clearly upon my life and my heart"

Beautiful indeed Helen...much enjoyed the read.
Hugs~Nancy

Autumn, the year's last loveliest smile~

Martie

Moderator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

5 posted 2006-10-12 12:24 PM

Helen

"I shiver when I think of you walking in mine"

when shadows touch it IS like that.

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

6 posted 2006-10-12 05:05 PM

I wear you like an invisible tattoo
where the dye darkens this truth daily
written so clearly upon my life and my heart

This is one of my favorites of yours... just beautiful! *S*

The Lady
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-12-26

Posts 7634
The Southwest

7 posted 2006-10-14 12:39 PM

beautiful Helen
and so plaintive...

miscellanea
Member Elite

since 2004-06-24

Posts 4060
OH

8 posted 2006-10-14 12:43 PM

I like how you expressed the intertwining of shadows. There's something magical about that picture! Enjoyed your poem

miscellanea

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

9 posted 2006-10-14 06:21 AM

This is wonderful work. Thank you for sharing it.

iliana
Member Patricius

since 2003-12-05

Posts 13434
USA

10 posted 2006-10-14 06:30 AM

Helen, thank you for sharing this beautiful poem. That invisible tatoo lines....loved it. *hugs*.....jo

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

11 posted 2006-10-14 08:29 AM

OneSlick~
And ... you 'word-wear' it so beautifully~

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
Email - noles1@totcon.com

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