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aziza
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0 posted 2006-10-10 01:15 AM


It is still fall in this northern land
But winter’s cold will soon offer its brand
Frosty fingers will kiss our cheeks pink
The nights will be longer, the daylight will shrink
For now the beavers swim in the stream
Their work is steady with no time for dreams
They’ll gnaw at trees until they cut them down
Covering their homes with twigs that they found
The birds have flown south before there is snow
Life is slowing down and the seasonal silence grows
I am busy building my woodpile tall
I have split and stacked throughout the fall
When the land is cold and the days are dark
I’ll heat my home as my chimney sparks
Into the night burning embers will fly
Into the darkness they’ll light up the sky
Like stars they will float high into the black
And drift high towards the heavens to never come back
The moose are now grazing and bedding in the trees
They are eating the willows before the branches freeze
Each step that they make is on frozen ground
They move through the day with hardly a sound
Only the dogs bark lets me know they are there
We gaze at each other with no fear or real care
They have their job to eat and take care of their young
I have mine to split wood under the weak, waning sun
It’s as if we smile and offer a simple “I wish you good day.”
Then turn to our tasks knowing that this is no time to play
Winter is coming and with it the ice and the snow
The temperature can drop down to sixty below
Animals and people have little time to visit and chat
We are too busy working on our cold weather fat
So if you see me all bundled up in my gear
Don’t feel sorry for me – winter is why I am here.

aziza


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The Lady
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1 posted 2006-10-10 01:36 AM





makes me shiver with appreciation
and just a little chill
aziza
I like it...

DreamerSpirit
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Buenos Aires, Argentina
2 posted 2006-10-10 10:31 AM


Excellent poem..i really liked it.
thanks for sharing.

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia
3 posted 2006-10-10 02:00 PM


Wonderful written visuals of the seasonal change , it springtime over here

Hope

sewasham
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4 posted 2006-10-10 03:35 PM


Very lovely. It is getting to be that time of year and old man winter will be here before we know it. Take care and Have fun. Steve


Titia Geertman
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5 posted 2006-10-10 05:19 PM


I just love winters, but I gather yours will be longer and colder than mine in The Netherlands. We too have split the wood and piled it high to burn the stoves, as we don't have central heating in our house.

Beautiful verse.

Like scattered leaves...my words will flow

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2006-10-10 07:13 PM


I can feel the winter setting in here already Aziza.  Enjoyed this lady.
passing shadows
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7 posted 2006-10-10 09:37 PM


winter is the cozy season, for sure! I love it!

and I love this poem!!

aziza
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Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy!
8 posted 2006-10-10 10:43 PM


Thank you all.

I truly love winter!

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